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Post by j. kinky on 12th October 2010, 3:22 pm

I fly away on my ganga carpet
I sink in the liquor lake.
I serve people for a living,
fake smiles with yes ma'am and no sir.
A short term slave, if you will.
I am a person of many worries, but filled to the capacity with pride.
A dangerous and paranoid pride.
A pride that harbors lust and hate in my heart.
You can see it in my blood shot eyes,
my soulful eyes holds a painful past.
Layered in a skin that I am uncomfortable with,
Yet I am.
A compassionate and passionate soul,
that travels thru life
like the water of a a bubbling brook.
Going between rocks, big and small.
Flowing to a place of the unknown.
which is exactly no where at all.


(I wrote this when I was in one of my "moods".)
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Post by ~*Kiana*~ on 2nd November 2010, 7:45 pm

I like the imagery. Nice Write.
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Post by j. kinky on 8th November 2010, 8:45 pm

thank u darling
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Post by TwistedKurlzz on 8th November 2010, 9:22 pm

I like it also
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Post by j. kinky on 12th November 2010, 4:41 pm

thank u twisted
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